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The stadium lights shone brightly in my eyes. I stepped up to the plate and drew back my bat. I wiggled my fingers, waiting. The pitcher wound up and threw. “Strike three!” the umpire yelled. That was the time I struck out at the quarter-finals. My team was counting on me.
Good use of vivid imagery to set the scene. Consider expanding this to create a more immersive opening.





























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